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for Exitus Acta Probat

by JellyBellys

person jezebel
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! dang cliffies... i'm dying... must have MORE!!!!! hehe. love the new installment, the story only gets better each time. it's addictive, i must admit. ^_^ and i'm still loving the interactions between hermione and igneus. she really seems to revel in the witty bantering.
person Marie
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter!! Thanks for clearing up the Tom Riddle issue...he seems so nice now that you almost forget who he becomes. However I do like the fact that you don't make Hermione imediatly fall head over heels for him, but instead actually remember who he is and what he as done.
person Sam
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see another chapter up... one question: will you continue to tell the reader whats going on in the future, or is the focus totally on Hermione? Either way it will be intresting to see what the next chapter hold's for the story.
person Keiliandra
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you posted up another chapter!! It took me a while before I could see if you had updated (blame how busy I've been preparing for school) and so I was definitaly pleasently suprised to see another chapter on one of my favorite stories. I love the "Tom Tarts"; orignial and so true. Will we find out who Marion is anytime soon? It's starting to drive me nuts that I can't figure it out...

The scene in Ancient Runes were Hermione was sitting at the same table as the future Voldemort and next to a person that he would kill personally (in the future) was a creative addition. The fact that you had people's past's in the story makes it definitaly more interesting; expecially with Ricard Potter who I assume is Harrys grandfather or great grandfather...
person Sarah
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you have at least the next few chapters written out... sounds selfish, but after this chapter I definatly can't wait to find out what happens next! All I can say is keep up the great work your doing cause I love this story so far! :)
person ccrawley
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
enjoying the story.
person Lyssa
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...it is so....so...SO...much fun!!!
person Keiliandra
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest chapter and want to say 1)Thanks for putting me in the authors note and 2)I've only now stopped laughing... You must have a better writers block than the rest of use because that was a thoughly entertaining chapter. I liked Hermiones first meeting with Tom Riddle and how not everything's absolutly perfect for her; like with Dumbledore being suspious of her and not automatically welcoming her with open arms... I can't wait for the next installment!!
person Marie
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you introduced Tom Riddle into the story... I agree with Anon on the fact of I'm not sure if I should automatically hate him or give him a chance....

I can't wait to find out who Voldemort "bugged" and how the attack goes! Keep up the great work 'cause I know you'll be able to pull through a writers worst nightmare...writers block... *shudders*

I'll check for the next chapter soon!
person Sarah
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand about the writers block... thanks for answering my question in the authors note though! I love how you always make each ending a chiffhanger; although I must admit that I am incredibly eager for the next chapter.

Again don't worry about the writers block...any one who has ever written or attempted to knows exactly how hard it can be to overcome them. I don't know if your open to suggestions (and I'm not sure if this really one anyway) but why don't you simply continue takeing her through all of her classes at least once and have either Tom in the class or someone else that she bonds with while she's in that time period... You may already be planning to do so or whatnot but anyhow continue the good work and don't get discouraged, 'kay?

- Sarah

P.S I like how you haven't just focused the fan fic on Hermione but have also kept the reader updated on whats going on in the future... it's a nice change from most time travel fic's I read.