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for Exitus Acta Probat

by JellyBellys

person Mad
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read and reread this story about a million times. I think its absolutely hilarious. Even better, you write it all in a way that makes it totally believable. I know its been quite a long time since you've updated, but I really hope one day you pick back up with this story.
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mari
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is the best fanfiction I have ever read ( and I have read a lot!) you simply must continue with it, I can hardly wait until yhe next chapter is out, which I hope i very soon..
keep up the good work!
person Anathema (formerly Moonstar)
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whether the former or latter disturbing explanation was true, one thing held; Potter had more issues than Witch Weekly.


*snerk*


*giggle giggle*


*snerk*



That was just....good.

Ugh! The Dursleys?!?! Pobrecita Harry! Although taking into consideration their...ahem...dislike of the Wizarding world, this should prove to be veeerry interesting!

Keep up the great work and get rid of that writer's block, woman! LoL ^__^


person Sarah
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!! I like how you are makeing Hermiones eventual relationship with Tom Riddle go slowly and not so fast that they're sleeping with each other after the second they see each other. It a nice change and it makes the story seem so much more realistic (the fact that they're takeing their time :)).

person Sam
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your starting to really develop the characters, which makes for a much more intresting read... I was wondering how long you were planning on makeing this story?

I'm glad that Hermiones starting to look into some different ideas on how to stop the inventual Lord Voldemort. However would she really be able to adle his memorie or would he still have to remain the same mentally? Since she can't kill him, I was wondering if she could do any harm to him at all...
person Marie
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your doing so great so far on this fan fiction!!! I love how your starting to get me and other readers more intrested in other side plots so that were not just focusing on Hermione. Like who was Evlyn (Urg... can't spell...) hanging out with and why didn't DUmbledore try to stop Tom Riddle if he was so suspious of him... It makes me so much more eager for the next chapter...
person Keiliandra
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated! It keeps on getting way more intresting with every chapter... I keep on wondering about all of the question's that Hermiones been asking. Will the memory charm work? Why didn't Dumbledore stop Tom Riddle if he knew he was bad?... 0-0... it truly baffles the mind.

I like the realism of the 'fight scene' between Hermione and the Snob Squad. It wasn't Mary Sue'ish in which everyone applaudes and they all become Hermiones best friend while they shun the Snob Squad for the rest of their lives. Instead while Hermione still came on top, she still appears to be at the same social standing, with only a few friends and Dumbledores distrust.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
person Mooonstar
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, I sat down to look through the various Harry Potter fics, right? Well, I come across this fic and lo and behold, two hours later I'm sitting here going "Where is the rest of it, dammnit?!?!?!" LoL

Seriously, great story and I must admit, it's nice seeing Dumbledore in a less-than-favorable light, if even for a short amount of time. ;)
person j.s.
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, I love your chapters. I can't wait to read the next one.