schedule
July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one heck of an awsome story.
can't wait for the next chapter(s) to be up!!!!!!!!
is it possible for you to email me each time when you update as i can't wait to continue reading this story!!!!!!!!!
please and thankyou
Natasha
can't wait for the next chapter(s) to be up!!!!!!!!
is it possible for you to email me each time when you update as i can't wait to continue reading this story!!!!!!!!!
please and thankyou
Natasha
schedule
July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a good start. However, it seemed a bit rushed. Maybe you could add in more detail on the next chapter. Also, if Ron and Hermione are not really friends of Harry's, why were they at the infirmary? Were they just walking by?
schedule
July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You set it up well. Love to see waht you do with it.
cdk
cdk
schedule
July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great start Jinx! Keep going - I can only imagine the things those three are going to get up to!