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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying Silent Abduction and hope to read more soon.
Poor Hermione.
Poor Hermione.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats a very good story. i like the plotline and evil snape is very bad! hehe. i love it please update soon and i hope you update often.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* she stepped into her food lol *sigh* I am a little twisted, great chapter cannot wait for more!! I like stories set after HBP :)
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is shaping up to be really good...i love to read stories where snape is totally in evil slytering/devoted death eater bastard...all i ask is for longer chapters...and let snape have his way with her...keep up the good work...take care
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love it so far, hope you continue and update soon.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh...certainly caught my interest!
One thing. Some of the dialogue seems a bit off. The use of "freak out," for example. Just doesn't seem to fit. Or the word "nighty." Maybe that's just me, but they stuck out.
Hope you update soon, will be looking ahead for more!
~Enthusiasto
One thing. Some of the dialogue seems a bit off. The use of "freak out," for example. Just doesn't seem to fit. Or the word "nighty." Maybe that's just me, but they stuck out.
Hope you update soon, will be looking ahead for more!
~Enthusiasto
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story already. I was wondering if plot includes why exactly he's taking Hermione? Other than that....update soon. Thanks.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS A PRETTY GOOD START,I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATE.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that certainly was short.
You have me interested though, and I look forward to your next chapter.
You have me interested though, and I look forward to your next chapter.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. I can't wait to read more.