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by AliAnn

person Harley Quinn
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg the computer cut off the rest of my review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Now I have to sum it up. Short
I fricken loved this story and all that you've done!Please write more!I'll be waiting!
person Dezra
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking to see if you updated this story, will you let Draco find a way out of his predicament?
person Dezra
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry's an asshole. Poor Draco, I hope he can find a way out.
person ZooArmy
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter!
What kind of interval you will choose for publishing new chapters?

The idea of Harry being a massive arsehole is great. It's not often found in fics.
Keep that thing running!!!^^
person Araniel
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please...keep writing , i love it!!!!!
person kitsu
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so far. I really like how you have Harry act out his anger towards Draco. In a lot of the stories I've read, he gets soft at the beginning which is fine and all but this seems mroe realistic to me. Draco was an arse to him during school and I don't think it is something one can forget so easily. Composition wise, it is very smooth and that's really awesome. Keep it up, i can't wait to see what happens.
person Argo
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was definitely shocking beginning. I was almost scared by Harry's coldness and indifference about Draco's fate. But I guess I can understand that souls grow coarse and become hardened during war and due losses of loved ones. I'm totally terrified for Draco. I hope you hadn't planned to give Draco to Greyback, I suspect it would be the rape scene there, and my poor weak nerves wouldn't bear this.
But I have one question: you hadn't specified the pairing of your story. It it MasterDraco and Slave Harry, as "Yes, My Lord" or on contrary MasterHarry and SlaveDraco?