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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good advice!!!! Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Story: Quite brilliant.
Was very fond of Lucius' little escapade. *Sniffle*
Quitting smoking: Drink fluids out of straws, avoid any situations You know will trigger cravings.
distract Yourself during said cravings - read, write, watch television, fidget with beads or something
Gum, Lozenges or Patches DO help. A lot.
She quit over a year ago.
Overall - KEEP YOUR HANDS OCCUPIED
Was very fond of Lucius' little escapade. *Sniffle*
Quitting smoking: Drink fluids out of straws, avoid any situations You know will trigger cravings.
distract Yourself during said cravings - read, write, watch television, fidget with beads or something
Gum, Lozenges or Patches DO help. A lot.
She quit over a year ago.
Overall - KEEP YOUR HANDS OCCUPIED
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing story so far! I really enjoyed reading it. Update asap!
As to quitting smoking, you can do it! Just think of how much cleaner everything will be without the constant influence of nicotine! It's not easy, but you're getting there, you obviously want to quite if you've gotten this far and that's half the battle. I know you can do it! Don't give up!
Back to the story, I was just wondering how old Draco and Harry are in the first bit, and then again two years later (obviously two years onto the original age) just to get a bit more understanding on their motivations. When you say that everyone is dead for Harry, do you mean like Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, Sirius, all the Weasleys, etc? I haven't seen them in the story so I presume you must have, but just to clarify.
Anyway I look forward to reading more
~gorgeousbowneyes
As to quitting smoking, you can do it! Just think of how much cleaner everything will be without the constant influence of nicotine! It's not easy, but you're getting there, you obviously want to quite if you've gotten this far and that's half the battle. I know you can do it! Don't give up!
Back to the story, I was just wondering how old Draco and Harry are in the first bit, and then again two years later (obviously two years onto the original age) just to get a bit more understanding on their motivations. When you say that everyone is dead for Harry, do you mean like Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, Sirius, all the Weasleys, etc? I haven't seen them in the story so I presume you must have, but just to clarify.
Anyway I look forward to reading more
~gorgeousbowneyes
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!! Oh no!!! Lucius just walked in!!!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry needs smacked.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As far as I'm concerned Harry is worse than Greyback. At least Greyback has never pretended to be anything but a monster, but Harry is supposed to be the Golden Gryffindor. It would have cost Harry nothing to let Draco stay in safety in his house for two weeks while he drew up his slave contract (and blackmailing Draco into serving him as a sex toy was another low). Instead he deliberately abandoned him to a life of abuse, rape and torture - and his justification for this is that Draco was mean to him at school. Well, guess what, Harry? Calling people bad names and making "Potter stinks" badges does not mean you deserve to be sold into slavery to a psychopath by your own father!
And two years later, after finding Draco in horrifying circumstances, Harry has the unmitigated gall to pretend that it's Draco's own fault for "choosing" to become Greyback's slave - did he truly think Draco would have appealed to him for help in the first place if he had had any other way of escape?!?
Personally, I hope that Harry learns some well-needed lessons in humanity in the chapters to come.
And two years later, after finding Draco in horrifying circumstances, Harry has the unmitigated gall to pretend that it's Draco's own fault for "choosing" to become Greyback's slave - did he truly think Draco would have appealed to him for help in the first place if he had had any other way of escape?!?
Personally, I hope that Harry learns some well-needed lessons in humanity in the chapters to come.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! this is so sad! I like Harry this way. I also like sweet and caring Harry, but I think this Harry is sweet deep down inside, but he doesn't want to be... Mmm... I'll just have to see, so please update soon!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn I feel bad for Malfoy.
And it looks like harry got brainfucked a few too many times. Yikes.
Good writing though, please update soon.
And it looks like harry got brainfucked a few too many times. Yikes.
Good writing though, please update soon.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great! continue please : )
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg I loved that!!Will there be more?!Please right more!I exspecially loved the way you made Harry. He was so dangerously cool!And Draco <3 Lol was Draco. Please write more!I'll check back every day! I love your writeing,and its the best i've seen so far,and your idea is so original.Pretty please write more?
And sorry if I sound so strange. Its 1:50am.
Love,
Harely.
And sorry if I sound so strange. Its 1:50am.
Love,
Harely.