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Wow, I'm at a loss for words...almost. This is so different and so awsome, love the hard ass Harry, I'm glad he's not a total asshole. I'm so hooked & can't wait for more.

ps I quit smoking 4 years ago(May)and there are still times I want one so bad I could eat it, but have faith & u can do it! ;)

omg need more. dying from no more words. please write more!

Am very much in love with this story. Calling draco 'bunny' was a little startling but it made me smile anyway.

I found chapter seven to be quite touching. I was a bit startled with this cold, hard, angry Harry at first. It is totally the opposite of the Harry we all know and love and I didn't know how to take this change. I honestly wasn't sure I wanted to keep reading, but something made me continue. I think it was curiosity. I'm interested to see where you take this. I was a bit worried that Harry was going to force Draco into the physical aspect of their relationship, despite his assertions that he wouldn't. After chapter seven, however, I am feeling reassured. I'm still hoping that something will soften Harry a bit. I was kind of uneasy with how cold he was about Draco's experience with Greyback and his total lack of empathy. I was also angered that he didn't feel that he had any responsibility for Draco ending up in that terrible situation or his feelings that Draco somehow deserved it or chose it. No one deserves something like that and Draco's ability to choose was taken away from him. I don't know how it could happen, but I'm hoping that Harry won't always remain this cold. The story is well written and despite my little concerns, I am enjoying it. Keep up the good work!

Hmmmm, I'm sure Draco's ignorance isn't going to be as bad as you describe it to be in your AN. You'll just have to post and let us decide for ourselves! And I don't think I could see Harry living fully as a wizard, without anything muggle, although I could see him living without magic, but not with this story and not with this Harry.

I finding it hard to put into words what I want to say about this chapter this time around ... I think I'm getting Draco's tongue tied-ness. I think, after being brutally raped, as Draco has (even if he 'technically' went into it 'willingly'), for him to actually enjoy sex after such a long time with Greyback where it's more just been about Greyback's pleasure and not a care to Draco's please or his well being ... It's going to take Draco a lot of time to accept it. Sure he can have sex, would probably prefer it if Harry just took it from him and told him what to do. But with Harry being almost considerate of his feelings ... that would undo him. Making him feel pleasure from it, and giving him this experience with how sex really should be, even if there is no love between them, could quite be Draco's undoing, but only for the time being. He'll be broken, but the pieces will eventually put themselves back together, whether he has feelings for Harry or not. Being the fan girl that I am, I'm hoping that Harry stops being a seedy asshole and appreciates Draco and what he's been through, so that they can love each other. But I'm also hoping that Draco gets a backbone and learns to stand on his own two feet before falling madly in love with Harry. Otherwise if something happens to split them apart, he'll fall to pieces again.

And I just thought I'd leave my email in case you wanted it: phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com that way if you feel the need to respond to my reviews in more than your AN you can, but I don't mind reading them in the AN either lol!

Great chapter and I can't wait for more!
~gorgeousbowneyes

Soo need chapter 7! I can see Draco not knowing any of that stuff. Why would he? He wouldn't need it in the wizarding world and then he lived with Greyback after that.

Thanks for the explanation, it helped to understand what's going on in each of their heads a little more and to make their actions seem understandable etc. I guessed post-hogwarts, possibly around the 20 yr old mark, so I was close! lol.

For this chapter, I felt that Draco's ignorance of Muggle appliances was actually believable, I agree with the whole Lucius wouldn't want Draco knowing about those despicable muggle things, best to keep them pure and all wizard yadda yadda yadda. In another aspect, it's also a good filler for conversation at the end of a chapter like that! lol.

But why is Harry living like a muggle? I understand that yes, he grew up with these kinds of things, but is everything strictly muggle, or does he use other wizarding ways of getting things done as well, eg the floo?

Anyways, good chapter, can't wait for an update,

~gorgeousbowneyes

i thought it was great and i think that draco would be ignorant with muggle things too.

Wow, this is great! I really like this fic. please post more soon~

i love it! poor draco!