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I'm really sorry to hear your computer caught a virus. Hopefully everything will be back to normal for you soon.
I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. :)

Oh i'm so sorry about what happened to your computer. that sucks i would absolutly die if i lost my computer. I'll wait or every new chapter.

Sooo need chapter 9! Draco could have it all if he just tried!

Hmmm, the Draco/Muggle subject. I think it's actually quite logical. Draco sees moving pictures, realizes that appliance is muggle n they cant have moving pictures, decides people must be inside box. Really quite logical. And yeah his reaction was good.

Ahh the Greyback issue! Once again the werewolf strikes Draco even when he's beyond the werewulf's control. Damn him.

I liked this chapter, just too tired to go into detail with wat was good and bad. If you wish my opinion specifically on anything I'd be happy to chat, you have my email, just send me a msg

~gorgeousbowneyes

I really like this story! Hard-assed Harry (and wouldn't that be the best porn name *ever*?) is a much more interesting character than the sort of whiny, constantly virtuous versions that appear so often. As for Draco's reaction to the television, I do find it believable that he wouldn't be familiar with it, and that he'd want to figure out it worked, but as for thinking there were actual *people* in it, I think that's a bit unrealistic. It's pretty clearly an image, and not 3-dimensional. (Perhaps if he saw a murder happen on the TV, and mistook that for real...?)

Great chapter! I think it is perfectly believable that Draco would be unfamiliar with how a TV works. He has had no contact with any muggle objects or artifacts of any kind. I think it is plausible that, at first glance, he would think there were actually little people in the TV. Upon closer inspection he might have figured out that they were not inside, but were a 2-dimentional image like, as Harry said, a magical portrait. Draco, however, didn't get the chance to inspect the TV more closely because he broke it. I really liked that Harry was softer in this chapter, that he held his anger in check upon seeing Draco's distress. It shows that he has more dimensions as a character, rather than just being one-sided and angry all the time. I like that Harry was so insistent that Draco read their contract. Hopefully it will alleviate Draco's role confusion and the tension he feels all the time. I also hope it gives him more confidence to be himself and to stop fearing Harry so much. I'm really getting hooked on this story and given my earlier trepidation, that's saying something. I just wish we could have an update more than once a week; the wait just kills me! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for chapter nine!

no you didnt but the tv breaking thing i didnt get it at first but i soon realized that it was fucking hilarious!

I think you handled the Draco/muggle tv part perfectly. It's hilarious he thought people were actually in the tv.
Harry does seem to have many different moods...but it does keep Draco wondering. Which is a good thing.
Excellent story, I really like it so far.

I like it. I want more. Please and thank you.

great story. Harry isn't so noble in this fic though but I lk this side you give him.