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by AliAnn

schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**tear** I fear this story has been abandoned. This makes me so sad because I enjoyed this story so much. Please, please come back to it. I still check for an update about once a week hoping that it will be coming back. I hope you are able to find the time to continue with it because I think it has a lot of potential to be a great story!
person ghostly
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you are going to continue with this story. I love it so far and hope for more in the future
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's me again. Just checking in to see how the story is going. I find that I still check the website almost every day to see if there is an update. I hope, hope, hope that you don't abandon this story because I like it so much! I can't wait to hear what happens next! Usually when I am reading a story that hasn't been updated for a long period of time I just forget about it and move on, but I like this one so much that I can't quite let it go yet. I hope you were able to fix the problem with that computer virus and were able to get all your stories back in order. I am sure you are busy, and that's why you have not been able to update. I know how that goes. I started a fic for another fandom (Queer as Folk) a few years ago and anticipated it being a long one, but stopped after two chapters and never went back to it. It works as a two chapter short story, but I occasionally got emails asking if I was going to finish it, so after a couple of years I finally I went changed it from a "work in progress" to "complete". So, that was a long way for me to say how I understand that life can get in the way, lol! Still, I'm hoping that this story will continue and I will keep checking regularly for updates. Good luck!
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really love this story and I was just wondering when you were going to start updating it again. It has been about three weeks and I am dying to hear what happens next! I am so sorry that you had that computer virus, I know that must suck. I really hope you don't abandon this story because I think it has great potential. Most of the Master/Slave type stories have Draco as the master and Harry as the slave, and they make Draco this sadistic, cruel character. I love that you have flipped it around and put Harry in charge. Not only that, but I love that you have made him a good and moral person. He isn't particularly kind or nice, but he is good, and I love that dynamic. I can't wait to see how you build up their relationship to the point where Draco is willing to have sex with Harry. Keep up the great work and I am waiting on pins and needles for an update!
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story! please update soon!!! woot! cant wait
person cnor9602
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. However, I wonder how long it will be before Draco gives into physical contact with Harry. As is so often the case with victims of assult, it takes a very patient and loving hand to bring them back around to intimacy again.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 10! Hope Harry knows what he's doing!
person jaimie
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
an earthquake huh? ^_^ i've never felt one. hurricanes, on the other hand... lol. I hope your house is alright.
viruses! urgh horrible little buggers aren't they? losing all that you've written is so depressing! I don't mind at all if the chapters take a little longer, I'm just glad that you're still continuing *glomps*

I like that Harry wants Draco to be able to get over the 'Greyback thing' before he starts anything with Draco but he has a long way to go with that. I do hope that Draco gets over 'not knowing his place' soon. I think Harry teaching Draco to cook will be a very good time for bonding. Not that the shopping trip wouldn't be, but I think Draco's too nervous. I can't wait for his reactions to the muggle store!
I'd like to learn more about Harry, and why he's 'Hard-assed Harry' aside from all his friends dieing. A more in-depth look at him, if you will. His plans to over-throw Voldemort.

anyways, The shopping interests me and I'll be waiting for that chapter when it comes!
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, like you said, shorter, but it had some vital stuff in it. Draco's thoughts were extremely accurate in my opinion. I can't get over the fact that he said something like 'Nothing Potter could do would change that' it's just so typical a response, and the fact that it's the same kind of words and meaning one of my friends is using against me at the moment - 'you have no idea what I've been through' etc. It just worked perfectly that scene for me.

As for your earthquake, I was like OMG COOL. I live in Australia and we barely get anything like earthquakes either, at least not where I am. I was like what is she on about, the bed was moving? Is someone shaking it? lol. I had this image of a mother type figure holding onto the end bed post and madly shaking the entire bed.

Anyway, can't wait for more! The shopping trip sounds like it could be very interesting. I was going to say 'The shopping trip sounds like fun!' but thats more because I love shopping trips, but I don't see Draco enjoying the crowds overly much. The electrical store might interest him however, even I get astonished by some of the things big appliance stores have, you could lose me for hours in there if I was allowed to play with it all!! lol.

OK so, looking forward to an update and good work with this!
~gorgeousbowneyes
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I didn't heard about the earthquke until i got to work this morning. i can sleep through anything i swear. I like this chapter.