rate_review Reviews

This is extremely good. And I'm anticipating what's going to happen next! Is Ron and Harry going to build a relationship out of these sexual outbursts, or is Hermione going to give in and get wild with to boys? I must know! Don't leave me hanging for to long!



P.S. - You have great writing skills. And I a great hand at imagery. ^_^

VERY HOT STORY, but Hermione isn't as bright a witch as I'd thought apparently. What girl in her right mind would walk out on Harry and Ron in that condition? I know I certainly wouldn't have left them like that.

Incidentally...did I miss the part about Hermione & Sirius, or is this just not yet finished?

So what happens when they wake up in the morning, and finds themself wrapped up in each others arms???? Add soon.....

really really really good

Wow. Good story. Hermione is really manipulative isn't she? Well, I'm just "glad" that Harry and Ron found their release. You use words very well, but there were a few grammatical errors here and there, nothing to bad. I'm not worried heck I barely noticed them because the story was so good. Thanks, Adios.

That's the sweetest and at the same time most erotic and naughty story I've probably ever read. While reading it I alternated between rubbing my hands in glee and laughing smugly with my discovery of the treasurechest of good feelings invoked in me by this wonderfully written story. I'm loving it, loving it, loving it. Saw at the beginning of the story that it said part one so I'll be crossing my fingers for a sequel :D
greatest love and admiration
Leenah