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hahahahaaaaaaaa!!!!
nymhadora! a virgin!!!??? not bloody likely!!!
apart from that...not bad.
gabsx

Seriously? Tonks is most definitely not a virgin. Did you notice her age at all or her personality for that matter?

wow i want more!!! update fast please!!!! i want to hear more of these of tonks and lupin!!! i dreamed about it since i read that she liked him at the end of the order of the phoenix!! this is really really REALLY good the detail is nice

i really loved it. tonks was really well written and remus stayed in character.

thanks for your review!

Hello! Just wanted to drop an honest review and let you know that you have a great start here.

One thing I look for when reading fanfic is the quality of the characters. Your story maintains a pretty good interpretation of Lupin. However, when it comes to Tonks, I think you should go back and re-read some of her dialogue and actions. When I read them, I got the distinct impression that this was some other character and not Tonks at all (aside from the newly returned pink hair that is. *grin*) Where was the fire? Where was the cheekiness?

I wish you the best of luck with this one, as Lupin and Tonks is one of my favorite pairings, though I'm told it's not popular to the HP-Purists. Pish on them. Let me know if you decide to re-work this, I'd love to come back and read it.

~Enthusiasto