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June 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing dark fic so far! i really hope there will be more soon!!! (^_^)
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow awesome! I do love a dominate harry! Update soon!!!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't be too proud of that over 10k words. You repeat. A lot. Harry smirks left and right. Gentle kisses everywhere. Its okay for a little bit, but you seem to do it every chapter.
Still though. Great work. I'll be awaiting the time when Harry is going to serve what Voldemort deserves.
Instead of stupidly admiring him at one point.
-_-
Still though. Great work. I'll be awaiting the time when Harry is going to serve what Voldemort deserves.
Instead of stupidly admiring him at one point.
-_-
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The violence and sex is whatever. Its Voldemort thats off. He's ... far too accepting. There should have been a fight that would have left them both near death. And then the classical 'Next time, Potter!'.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking great story so far. Please continue this one, I really wanna read about Harry raping that 16y girl and maybe Ginny Weasley also :p
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it until I got to the part where Harry killed Hedwig. Surely he could have just removed the trackers like on his wand... other than that it was pretty good for a torture story. First good one i've seen.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
go on
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is really dark and evil! i love it! my one suggestion is to really play up bellatrix's evilness because she seems a little soft right now, but REALLY good aside from that! hope you update soon!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please I can't wait to read more. Let me know when a new chapter is up. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please