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for Breathless

by mandaamen

person Avari20
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was too funny. Normally I hate first person narratives (I can't stand not knowing what EVERYONE is thinking, and I'm sure there's some psychological explanation for that), but seeing it first hand from Draco's point of view added that little extra something to his character. I liked how you portray him as completely devoted to Hermione (Cute nicknames like Study-bug? I love it!)but he's still tough as nails. Looking forward to an update!

-Avari
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person anonymous
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I totally love this story and the #1 reason is because it is in dracos view and he really has some comical thoughts.......looking forward to the next chappie.....
person joanna
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! It's humorous and witty!
person Stag
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh....I want an update!
person Eliana
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mm smutty !
update soon !