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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person kazfeist
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, another wonderful chapter, though I think you used "past" instead of "passed" in one spot. I wonder what's going to happen next? :D
person tanza
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found this and i'm hooked!!! Can't wait for the next part. I can't decide who I feel more sorry for in this fic- Draco or Hermione?
person egella
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please please continue this is an amazing story that has a unique twist and tone that honestly is like an oasis in the desert of dreary over used dramione plots and cliches. Love it comune with that muse of yours!
person s
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOO!!!! QUICK, UPDATE!!!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey... i hope you update this soon... it's really goood... i love it so far. :D
person kris.t!n.e
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till you post again I absolutely love this!, just wondering you post this anywhere else?
person kazfeist
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I wish I'd know you'd updated! A very interesting twist! Hopefully the new job and new surroundings are to your liking. Now, I'm wondering what else is going in in Hermione's head. :D
person Jackie S
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I al in love with your story, and i hope that you coninue to update it. Its kept me on the edge of my seat, wondering when Hermionie will be herself again, and this chapter is FANTASTIC.

Look foward to reading more, and your doign a brilliant Job

-Jackie
person kazfeist
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, my email is: kazfeist@gmail.com. I usually put it here but I guess it's not shown to you. Yours is listed as hidden, as well. Secondly, I think cystitis is not only a UTI, but a common complaint of new brides, because they're using areas not usually used? ;) The "naughty bits" get a bit irritated and inflamed. I think that may be why I mentioned it. I forget now, it's been so long since I've had a chance to read this. Anyway, thanks for posting over at CG, I check that often. And, I'm soooo glad you've updated! :D
person kazfeist
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good transitional chapter, and the smut was nice, too. Hermione seems to be getting used to the idea of being married, and married to Malfoy. But no further progress on getting her out of her funk. Looking forward to seeing how she makes that journey! :D