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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person Miah
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was way cruel!
I absolutely love this story, it's exceptionally well written.
And isn't there a saying about "you can't rush art" or something? *shrugs* I'm sure the same applys to authors and their works of literary art. I can't wait to see what Hermione has to say in your next chapter.

I would love to get an email notice of any update, pretty please! Thanks!
person JaynaM
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo glad you made her come back!! more soon!! LOVED IT

Jayna
xxx
person BuffyXO
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you are back! Whew-hoo ((throws up imaginary confetti))! Although, this chapter was a little mean with the cliffhanger at the end, at least you updated this story and kept the plot moving forward. I am glad that Draco decided that he liked Hermione for beyond his carnal satisfaction. I know that it is tempting to go overboard with Draco missing her, but I am glad that you kept it in character and grounded in normal responses. His replies to Harry and Ron made perfect sense and should to her as well. I hope that she has made steps to dealing with the grief that her parents' deaths caused in her absence. I know that their road to happiness is never easy, but her catonic behavior is something that I have not read before and I cannot wait to read what you have planned next. I would enjoy some of her POV, but that may be too telling. Anyhow, keep up the great work!!! :)
person shelagh
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Horray an update! Evil Cliffie though. Update soon!
person Mandy
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter,ive loved this whole story,its awesome! Please hurry and update,dont leave us hanging like that :-P
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evil evil person!! For someone who hates it when authors put cliffies in stories you do it alot!! Update soon!!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to finish this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person JaynaM
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOO!! NOOO!! COME BACK!! please you have to update!!

Jayna
xxx
person Jesse
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
urgg! How dare you!!! :) You are EVIL!! anyways, love the plot, and the writing. Brilliant. Can't wait for more.
person hermdray
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg pleasepleaseplease update soon!!!!

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