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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person kazfeist
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I have already reviewed, but consider this an additional one....can't wait to see where she's been! :D
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Appraises to God!

Finally found a draco/hermione fic that I always wanted to read. When I first read all those marriage law fanfics, the only top story to last a wonderful impression was 'A Dowry of a Single Galleon'. Now this has joined the list.
All I gotta say is I love what you have written so far.

And the emotions or lack of emotion you've given to Hermione is really believable. This is an adultfic with every chapter having some juicy smut.

finally have my dramione addiction sedated for now.

Do update soon.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more
person Panther Eyes
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guess they will ok... for now.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Can't wait to see where it goes now that H. is back. Hope you can updated again soon.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are SUCH an evil little cliffie witch! You rotten thing you! LoL

Seriousness though. Awesome chapter. I can't help but feel sorry for pobrecito Draco. Hermione has a looooooooooooooot of explaining to do!!!!

Update soon, luv!
person Joanna
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh you witch! u left a cliffy again! Hahahaha....well i hope this time you will update sooner than before. this chapter was good. it gave insight of draco's thoughts on Hermione's absence and on children. it's good to know that he actually cares for her and that because of hermione, it made him changed his mind about kids. can't wait for the next one!
person Magali
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! i love it and you're right the cliffhanger here is terrible... can you please send me an email when you update? iamladylena@yahoo.fr
thanks
magali
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter, and already I'm pleasantly surprised at your writing style. Very well written, and because of that I'm hooked already. I can't wait to see what you can do with this idea. Brillant so far, please keep going with this.
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I really liked the last line "I do." The only thing that seemed a bit off to me was this line: He sighed and lifted to the phone to begin the arrangements. I would think that Draco Malfoy would use the floo network instead of a muggle invention. Wonderfully written, and the plot is getting rather interesting. I can't wait to read more!