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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person Mel
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading your story. I am sorry to "read" that you are bringing it to an end. This last chapter really showed Hermione the way we are all used to seeing her.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw it was beautiful!
person JaynaM
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! she's back!!! loved the smut!! More soon

Jayna
xxx
person errika
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!
person vanillesky
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, I'm glad she's back to her old self!! Thanks for the quick update by the way, you should do that more often! lol. Just kidding, take your time so that the chapters are perfect. xx
person kazfeist
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update, hon! I'll email you later, ok? Karen
person zara
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say_work well done_I really love your persistance in portraying hermione's numbness (I hope my writing doesn't bother you, English is not my first language). Hopefully, she'll get out of it soon, because I'm really curious to see how you'll turn her around. Update soon?
zara
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! I hope you write more when this is done, because you are a good writer and I enjoy your style!
person BuffyXO
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that there was not a cliffhanger in this chapter, because those seem to drive me crazy. I am also glad that you did not make it easy for them to come back together, since in real life working on problems is never as easy as saying, "I'm sorry." I love that he got a little bit of his spitfire back, but I think it is important to note that she is not the same person that they were at school and neither is he. We all change and mature as life changes around us. For people in their young adulthood, this is so true and I can only imagine how hard it would be to lose a parent when all of those other changes are also at play. You did a wonderful job with this story and I want to see them deal with a child coming into their home and the disruption that it causes for everyone. Maybe in a sequel? You have done such a great job with this story that I would happily read on. Keep up the great work on your last chapter of this story.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter!!!