rate_review Reviews

I like it. I can't wait to see if Draco can pull her out of the funk she is in. And if he does, I want fireworks!!! lol

Sorry for not putting a review in each chapter. I like to read all the chapters posted and then put in a review. When I first read your notes in the beginning, you mentioned that this is different compared to the other Marriage Law influenced stories like how they will fall instantly in love. I must admit that I like those stories but after reading yours, I see why it is different. In some way, Draco does began to fall for Hermione but obviously don't show it or refused to show it. And Hermione is in depression because of her parents death. I wish you give more insight as to what Hermione is really feeling about everything. At the end of Chapter 6, Hermione was suprised at Harry's remark. Are you hinting that there will be some sort of romance between the two?

I forgot to tell you if I like your story or not. I do and I can't wait for the next few chapters to find out if Draco succeeds in helping Hermione get her old self back and if they do eventually fall in love.

It's a wonderful story. I'm actually suprised it has only taken one review. Few things though, try making your chapters longer (which you did) and Hermione seemed a little OOC, seeing as she agrees to this marriage quite fast without much of a fight. Try building up her fierce personality. Other than that, job well done!

Excellent. I must say I'm intrigued to see where this will go...though I'm not quite sure I like Hermione being as submissive as she is. Perhaps she'll slip out of it soon though.

I've enjoyed it and you MUST continue!

awesome.