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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I always know that I'm in for a well-written story when I find one of yours on this site. I'm very appreciative of your writing and I would definitley like to read more of this story as well. Please continue and soon! ^_^
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it so far! Keep writing more of it.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely beginning, and if you are so inclined, a very nice ending too. If you choose to continue I'd be more than happy to read. I think you avoided a lot of clich
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the hell is Draco playing at ...........taking advantage of her when she's in such a state.....great chaps though i would've reviewed the other chapters but i was too intent on reading the next chapter so plz forgive me!!
sanaa (saz) xoxox
sanaa (saz) xoxox
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz tell me you are gonna update.....that was a great chap i'm dying to know what will happen
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story !
i cant wait to find out what
happens next ! update soon please !!
i cant wait to find out what
happens next ! update soon please !!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very unique story.
I must say I really do like it.
I hope Hermione comes back though. I miss her too :]
I must say I really do like it.
I hope Hermione comes back though. I miss her too :]
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was slightly put off by the way you tried to justify Hermione's concession to Draco because I thought perhaps you could have explained the reasons behind her actions more in depth, rather than just having her display a case of extreme apathy. And I was more than surprised that Harry and Ron didn't react more angrily to Draco's idea of a reactionary measure turned into a big deal. But I felt like your writing improved a lot since the first chapter or maybe it's just because I like longer chapters and I can confuse quantity with quality... However, I hope you don't take this to mean I don't like the story. Because I do! Things turned out nicely. I rather like the way you handled Draco and Hermione while in bed. Not the sex per se, although it was good smut, I mean each of their prohibitions towards one another, especially the mild way in which Draco treated Hermione.
So I hope this review helped, and that I, along with the other readers, will be seeing chapter 7 real soon!
So I hope this review helped, and that I, along with the other readers, will be seeing chapter 7 real soon!
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i usually revive at the end of what i read so i finished the prewritten chaps so i'm reviewing cuz i wat tyou to continue!!! i want to see how this ends up!!
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Pretty great story so far. I was expecting it to be all cliched, but it's not in the least.
Good job Duchess!
Good job Duchess!