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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person Moonstar (formerly Given2Fly)
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self*


Whew! I'll never be able to look at desks the same, that's for sure! I'm itching to know how Draco will react when Hermione finally comes out of her depression...and maybe argues with him a little more than he'd like. Perhaps he'll wish for some of the "complient" Hermione back.

Oblivious to the fact that he's in love with her, isn't he? Hhhmmm...well, never let it be said that men are the smartest creatures amongst us in that particular field. ;)

Excellent work, as usual Duchess, and I can't wait til the next update...keep those chapters coming!!!
person Rosei
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very fun and sexy story.
Your writing is excellent!!
Thanks!
person Salome
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue! At first I was a little skeptical, it didn't sound right that Draco would decide to marry her the day right after her parents died to make her feel better. Maybe I misread it and it was some time later, but it would seem more accurate that anyone who really cares would give her more time. No one can get over death in a day. But other than that, I've liked a lot of the plot developements. I really want to see what happens next, so please keep writing, if not for others, for yourself :)
person baybevoyce
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I, just in kind, return the thanks for the time and consideration you took to explain it to me. Before, I rather thought you had little semblance of where this story was headed, and therefore kept some things implicit so I apologize for my misunderstanding. Your response was duly noted!
As for this chapter, I've always imagined a mary-sue Hermione to be the kind you've described: as wonderful and serene as a cherub. Sitting in the clouds. Looking adorable. Okay maybe that's taking it too far, but you get it.
person jaqui
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there..I'm really enjoying this fic...at first I wasn't sure if I'd like it..but I do :) I like it quite a bit, and I'm sure it will only get better. I'm waiting for the update!
person Soofija
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that certainly is interesting, I can't wait to read more of this. I really do hope you update soon.
It's interesting, and frustrating, to see how Hermione is so wind up in her own sorrow. I can't wait for Draco to wake her up. It certainly will be interseting to see when he slowly bu steadely falls in love with her, and her love for him wakes him up =D
(See, I've gotten in all figured out)
Love, Sofia
person May
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. I think I might be devastated if you don't continue the story :( It's so completely amazing.
person lolita
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do not even think about not writing anymore, this is amazing. Very well written, with a plot. I love it.
person Lexy
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay now you're going to make me beg here...

*gets down on her knees*

Please, please, please update this fic. It's really, really, really good!
person moxie
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! I just found this story via a rec on dramione and I am SO SO glad I went to read it right away. I LOVE it. Seriously. Please continue -- it's so good. Even if it's only a small little chappy full of smut. Please?