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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person LadyRain
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I am loving every chapter, not matter how short or long really. Though at the beginning I wasn't fond of Hermoine's attitude I think I like the way Draco is determined to help her push through it. I just hope it takes much more than just those random physical moments.
I'll be looking for the next update!
person jaqui
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I already reviewed this fic, but I want to say again that I love it...I hope Draco can get her out of her funk.

I also wanted to say that I dont think you should write with us in mind, write for you and only you. I think authors do their best work when they write for themselves, and dont think about what their audience might say about it.
person tank
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person georgina
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It really is a well done story, I sorta want Hermione to be her normal firey self again so I want to see what happens.

Update!

geo
person Deirdre
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waiting for the next one already :)
person savysavestheday
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I definitely fancy this fic and although I usually do go for "more" evil Draco, this one just stole my heart... he's so cute and she's so... I dunno, but I like this weird state of hers and how she's slowly but rather surely cracking out of it. It's interesting to read. Me wants more!
person J.S.
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like the development of this relationship. I am curious, though, about Hermione's feelings about Draco.
person Laura
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is good please update soon. I don't really like how Hermione is so submissive it really puts out the fire when Draco and Hermione finally get together. But its good all the same.
person slykitten
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful so far. I love how gentle youve made Draco with Hermione. And the lovemaking scenes are, in two words, very sexy. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the rest!
person Ann
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ignore us. Either way, you're writing's wonderful. ^-^