rate_review Reviews

i liked it!

This is positively one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I'm on ch. 6 but excited to see that's it done, so I won't have to wait for the finish...but am sad it's only 12 chapters! You are now one of my fave authors.

I love the depth of Hermione's grief, that she would resign herself to this fate...and that he's so loving with her...oh, it just melts my heart. I love the two of them together!

So glad to see this update! It's an interesting twist on the marriage law genre and I can't wait to read more. Who'd have thought Malfoy could be so noble in trying to get the old Granger back (even if it is for his own amusement?).

Lovely update, I'm so ecstatic to have the old Hermione alive and kicking!

I am reading the story and I like it so far. The chapters are short but I was warned of it from the beginning. However I like the jist behind it in fact. It's actually uncommon and not cliche for Hermione's parents to have died. The whole fact that she's too depressed to fight him off is a new twist too so don't worry about your storyline being overused. This is a new take on the marriage law fic that I haven't seen before. I am reviewing now after like the third chapter (or maybe the fourth) so I don't know exactly where it is going yet. However when I read the "Please Review" type comments at the bottom the page I took a break from reading and decided to write this review. =^_^= I'll review again when I have finished reading what you have posted so far.

I have just finished with chapter eleven and I am amazed. Sadly I usually find that shorter chapters results in poor writing as well and that just isn't the case. Your a wonderful writer and I love this story. Please keep it up *Resorts to begging and pleading for an update*

i like your story very much! Draco is everything he should be, a gentleman, educated, Slytherin,eheh, (I love Slytherin),even if I am a Gryffindor myself, or probably because i am one ,Ahahah, anyway, I just hope Mione is not going to became the-litlle-know-it-all that alwyays get's her way, because she doesn't know it all and needs to learn a little about life.I wish someone would write a story where she is not taking control of everything and everyone,but learning more and realize that books don't teach you everything and beeing the best student doesn't make you the best person!
Sorry for this...I should be telling you that your story is great and i like the way you write very much! and i do. thank you
and forgive my bad english. I'm portuguese and writing in english is a hard time

Oh I am looking forward to the next chappie. I love the confrontational relationship they share, it should be promising! update soon!

Love it! I just discovered this fic and now I cannot wait for the update.

PLease don't forget about us. I love this fiction and I'll be waiting for you to update it. please update soon.

You totally ROCK
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