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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person Anon
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! A very well done love scene!
person Annika Lee
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Excellent work! More more more more more.... Sorry, I'm getting greedy. I can hardly wait for the next installment.
person Sisqi
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... hot! Well written, and original (at least I can't recall having read anything that follows quite this plotline for a while). Thanks, and keep it up :)
person vivnow
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've recommended this fic to everyone. I just love the way you write both of these characters. I do hope that you will update soon. :)
person lulz
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you ARE going to update soon, right? *glares daggers* RIGHT? i love this story, i think i read it when it first came out and then didnt come back to aff for ages... glad to see you kept it going. anyway UDPATE SOON!
person Allison
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really like this story!!! I hope hermione comes out of this funk she is in...shes being so submisive! Come on Hermione..tell him off!! Well I can't wait for the next chapter..so WRITE WRITE WRITE!!! :)
person Nate
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
usually, I hate Hermione/Draco fics.... it just seems wrong, but I like this one a lot. You're doing a fantastic job, it's a story that I haven't seen before and I think it's wonderfully written. Keep up the good work!
person kazfeist
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly like short, sweet, chapters. While the subject you've chosen is, as you've said, "long overdone", I think I'll like your treatment of it. :D
person kazfeist
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to save my reviews until I've read the rest of the story, if you don't mind....the short chapters are so intriguing, and they just pull me along to find out the rest of the story. :D
person kazfeist
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely evocative chapter. Did you mean "erogenous" instead of "erroneous" zones?