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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person errika
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am lovin this story!
person Anathema (formerly Moonstar, who was formerly Given2Fly)
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Something about this chapter just really brought it all together for me. I'm not sure if it was because of the tenderness Draco showed her towards the end, or if it was the simple thing of the House Elves putting her clothes away and not knowing where they were.

Excellent chapter, excellent work, as usual! Look forward to your next update!!!
person Sarah Cox
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank gods you finally updated, that was a long time coming. I thouroghly enjoyed this chapter and thought their behavior was very realistic considering the situation, but by no means boring. I find that your story is very creative even for a cliche marriage law fic, and when you've read as many Draco/Hermione fics as I have there nearly nothing that isn't a cliche. I still can't wait to read more, and I hope you don't leave us readers hanging so long like you did before.
person Miah
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I think the interaction between Draco and Hermione is amazing. I mean how he's still trying to prove a point and how she's still stuck in her submisive manner, and the way they're both dealing with marriage, I LOVE IT! I keep checking for updates, and am way excited to see what you come up with next. AWESOME JOB!
person Tizzy
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like where this is going. :D It's actually kinda sweet in a way even though he sorta controls her kinda. Yeah...But aww i really lyke it. Keep going with it. I'll keep checking for updates :D
person ani
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo glad you decided to take up this story again. loved the last chapter and looking forward to reading more. soon....
person xXxMrs.MalfoyxXx
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiya brillant hurry and update plzplzplz
person oxcab
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, another great ch. ^_^ i like how this one came out ^_^ draco's a snuggler how cute ^_^
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
person joanna
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update! i thought this chapter was good. she's getting back to work and still being the same as she was after her parents' accident. with the way this chapter ends, it appears that draco is starting to have feelings for hermione. will there be more of that in the next chapter? how many chapters are you planning to have for this story?