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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person lilhouself
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story keep writing. Is draco really going to ease up on the contract? or is that that?
person moonjameskitten
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I've just discovered your story and ...I find it absolutely adorable and sexy ! I really like the way you develop their relationship, with Draco trying to 'awake' Hermione from her shocked state. I love his tenderness as much as his determination to give her pleasure !
The whole story is simply awesome and I can't wait to read more ! Update soon, please !

Moonie
person KanSol
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You spelled "Quidditch" wrong. Sorry that's the first thing that came to mind. Also I was pretty stoked to read your story only after reading the author's note. Yeap, had me hooked.
person KanSol
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dig the "I do" at the end and your story (w/ all these dang provisions) is like no other marriage story I've read before. So congrats!
person BuffyXO
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job on building a twist on the typical marriage law stories. I think the thing that will make Hermione snap out of her depression will be when she gets pregnant. I think that Draco has loved her before the law and just used it to get close to her. It would be nice to hear his reason to marry her in the first place. I know that he likes her wit and fire, but there must be something more there, since he could have his choice of the women. Again, great job -- please update!
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww :) This fanfic is sweet and sexy. I love it :)
person vivnow
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon. I'm really addicted to this fic. :)
person JF
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! i like the idea of a subdued hermione although i hope it wont last. i just hope that you are able to update faster.
person LadyRain
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think you've done a very nice job with this chap. The ending fit,so don't worry over it.
Though, I'm wondering now what do you really have in store for them to bring more than just their bodies together. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chap!
person Della
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this so far and I can't wait to read more. Marriage Law fics are always appreciated. :) Amazing job.