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for State of the Union

by lbrado

person lk
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! I got annoyed with Draco in the first few chapters, even though I knew he was acting this was for H's benefit, but I felt like he was overdoing it. But then I understood, and I ended up liking it! Can you do a sequel? Or an epilogue?
person jekodama
schedule January 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
A perfect ending. I loved it.
person the bells
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a believable, well-written Dramione lacking spelling and grammar errors? I'm impressed, and moved. The characters were believable, the smut hot, and the ending perfect. Thank you so much for thoroughly entertaining me for the past hour and a half.
person Janeplay
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY!!! I loved it. I really loved Draco's character and the way he tried to bring Hermione out of her funk. Awesome writing!! Can we have an anniversary edition? Like 25 years down the track...
person DB1
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@12 awsome story though i wish the ending was a happy ever after

*DB*
person chyara
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed this fic. Keep them coming.
person Jessica
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..Favorite Hermione/Draco fanfic, ever!
You are an exceptional writer and I really admire you.
I hope someday my writing skills are atleast half par with yours.
Please keep writing! Please, for the love of Malfoy!
Short and sweet, not overly descriptive.. but yet I could
envision it to a 'T'.. absolutely brilliant.
person luvhp
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great take on the marriage law. I am so glad I didn't read this until it was comepltely finished so that I could reap the benefits and not have to hang onto evil cliffhangers! ;)
I'm sorry you could not end it "and they lived happily ever after" but hey, I liekd the ending just fine for this story! I loved how they both agreed they didn't love each other and maybe they could learn to one day.

If you ever get the urge to do a sequel I will definately follow you to the ends of this story! :)
Loved it!!!!
person Magali
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Thanks for the update. It's been so long I didn't even remember what it was on about until I read "wedding law" though... *ashamed* forgive me !
But I liked it all the same: update sooner this time !
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting that u would end the story like that. very good.