rate_review Reviews

Nicely done. The chapters are a little abrupt....and one isn't quite sure if you're still on the same day or a different one at the beginning of each chapter. I mean, Hermione's got to have some SERIOUS PMS to be as moody as she is. LoL

Regardless of my opinion on that, it's well written and I would love to read more, and look forward to your updates.

Hey, good job. You suck, but in a good way. ;)

No, seriously, this seems fun so far. And I did love the image of them trying to share a bedroom. They're such anal characters...can you imagine the fights over where things would go?

great story. i love it so far.

Hey, I think this story is great, Can't wait to see what happens next!!

It's turning out pretty fun.

When Draco said, "Magic, Hermione" was my favorite in the last chapter.

I like the story, I just wish the chapters were a bit longer. Please UPDATE soon!

Hey, so far so good, keep writing, keep the chapters coming, hooray! keept it going :)

This story has a lot of potential. And your grammar is not as bad as other fics... I hope you make longer chapters though because I'm enjoying the concept. :)

The story is good but its a bit redundant, It seems like there are times when you say the same thing three times in slighyly diffrent ways over the course of a chapter. Its really unnecessary and it makes the reader skim or stop reading all together. Also the first chapter seems written a completly diffrent way than all the other chapter and does not fit at all. I think this could be a great story if you just alter a bit of it...also read it aloud and try to read it from the perspective of a reader not of the perspective of something you wrote.