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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's not hard to tell you are a talented author, but i feel as though your story is confusing in it's tenses. You use past tense, then present. Hmm...
But other than that minor detail i think it's good, really good. But it lacks something... i'm not sure what though, but keep it up.
Julia
But other than that minor detail i think it's good, really good. But it lacks something... i'm not sure what though, but keep it up.
Julia