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Thanks for the update this story is getting good I hope to see more update's soon i can't wait, your friend Aka EsmeraldaSnape.

Woohoo an update!! I can't wait to see how the rest of Hermione's pregnancy goes. I can just imagine the look on Harry's and Ron's faces..lol...Update soon please and wonderful chapter I might add!!

Great fic!!! :) I'm loving it. Keep up the wonderful work!

Love Severus being confused and at a lose for words. This was so sweet.

A beautiful Chiristmas eve!

uh okay whats with all the fuckin repetition of "wife" over and over again? that sounds lame. but other than that, this story rox, dude. good job!

Awwwww!!!!! I love it. Lol that sure put Severus at a loss for words. And ohhh Harry is stepping on Hermione's toes hope he learns to stop. It would be a shame to see them part as riends however I am glad she stuck up for her husband. I love those two together. I love delicious Severus anyways lol. more more more please. Awesome chappie. Please update soon.

Please update soon. I really love this story. Please Please update soon!!!!

It may have been 10 chapters ago, (LOL) but, I would like to applaud your wedding scene. No, JKR doesn't include much religion - merely passing mentions of Christmas and Easter. However, we fan fiction writers aren't JKR. If we were we wouldn't add to the wonderful universe she created. We'd leave it at canon, and there would be no SS/HG. There wouldn't even be any need to post at Adult FF. All fan fiction is alternate universe - only JKR's writing isn't. A creative fan fiction writer employs artistic license ad infinitem ... so - *applause* to your creative wedding scene. You do what you want to do, and your loyal readership will appreciate it. Those who don't... can read something else. It's for you to write. It's for your reviewer to offer encouragement and constructive critisism. As a reader I found the binding scene to be complete and utterly beautiful. You included a basic introduction from Albus which would be necessary for those readers not familiar with these kind of binding rituals. Everything was very well written. The only constructive critisism I can offer for this scene is that you might have included a bit more of Severus and Hermione's points of view, and perhaps a few more descriptors. However, it is not necessary. As I said the scene did not feel lacking. It was very well done and quite touching. It seemed very natural, not contrived or taken from any Pagan / Wiccan resource verbatem. It was lovely. You can't please everyone. You did please me; and, I am sure you pleased countless other readers. However, you need only please yourself. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing.

Excellent story!