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I stumbled across this story this morning and totaly fell in love with it. I'm sorry to hear about your husband. Here is wishing him a speedy recovery.

I really, really like your story - it is very well written and I just love the storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter... and good luck with your husband's surgery, I'm sure he'll be fine. Spoox

I both like and dislike this story. My compliments are major, my complaints are minor. The characterizations, pacing and plot are all admirable. The wedding scene was truly lovely. OOC Snape is gentle and likeable...the rest of the characters are quite canonical, and I appreciate the touches of humour. But the grammar and punctuation are atrocious. I blame the betas for not catching such obvious errors as 'then' instead of 'than', possessive 'your' used when the contraction 'you're' was intended, and so many runon sentences that I had to reread paragraphs two or three times just to catch the meaning. It interfered so much with my reading experience that I felt I had to tell you. Many great writers have their problems with technical matters, and you are talented enough that a good editor could make the difference between success and ridicule for you. Your betas have let you down. But keep on writing. "Your better then you're betas"!

OMG I hope everything is ok! Keep me posted, girl, and hang in there!

Good luck to you and your husband. I enjoy your writing, and hope you return to it.

I love this story, but I'm willing to wait indefinitely for the next installment, as real life definitely takes precedent. I hope your husband's surgery goes well.

Of course we understand dear. Take good care of your DH. We will wait patiently for your next update.
sheila

Hope all goes well!

My thoughts and prayers are with you and your husband. I hope things go well.Take care.

Sooo... I only got to about chapter 8 or 9 when I saw you mentioned that you had flamers and that baffles me. The writing and plot is really fantastic. I don't understand why people make such a big idea about the wedding (by the way, beautifully done. It must have taken you forever to write that, so thank you for the hard work!). Yes, I suppose there are certain charcteristics of religion incorporated, but this is fan fiction for a very obvious reason. It is not REAL and most fics come from the writer's fantasies and wants. But anyways... The way the romance started is so cute. ^_^ I just loved it. I realize that I haven't finished the fic yet, but I'll go ahead and say it. I think we should see the "mean" side of Severus now and again. This reminds us that Hermione is still married to THE Severus Snape, and he won't seem to be falling from his character as time goes on.

The Malfoy family's acceptance of her piques my interest. It'd be cool to see some relationship grow from it, like a protectiveness or something of the sort. Buuuut, I should probably read on to see if you've already done so! LoL So great job!