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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow, this story is addicting!

i have loved it so far! it has just the amount of drama and humor in it.

cant wait for the next chapter!!!

omg this is so fantastic!!!!! And anyone who flamed you deserves to be hexed!!! I love the emotions you put in between hermione and Severus! For lack of better terms, it seemed, well, magical between them!! I actually started reading your other story you just started, sorry i cant remember the title, and i liked it so much i thought i would see what else you wrote and i came across this! I absolutly love it when an author creates their own A/U and has an in depth story line like yours does. Anyways, i'm very tired, and as it is very late, i must be going, but keep up the good work and update soon!!!

I found this story by accident and read all 20 chapters without realising it. This is a good story & I look forward to updates.

For Christmas you could have gave us an update, but I will settle for a good ole smut fic featuring ME and Remus. We miss your good writing skills and I sorely miss this story. Please come back and update soon!!!

love it! you have a sense of humor that is great but not overwhelming. it is very well written! kodos

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi. So far I really like this story. I hope you explain more about the ancients. Please go through and eidt for apostrophes when showing onwnership/possession. In ch. 3, they are missing in quite a few places such as Hermione's rooms and something of Dumbledore's. Also, you split up many sentences or combine sentences improperly. Review the use of the wonderfully underutilized semicolon as a means of joining an adjunct thought to a main sentence. I also found it a bit odd that in Ch2 Hermione noted that Snape was not in the Great Hall for lunch, but in Ch3, Snape was there watching them; I guess he came in and she didn't notice. In Ch. 3, it was a bit odd in one paragraph you have Snape enjoying his walk to Dumbledore's office because the students were in class, but then went on about how much he liked walking the halls late at night. He must have taken a very very long route if it went from afternoon to late at night. Good for you; Ron acutally not being a total git. I am so sick of him so often being portrayed as hot-headed and dense which seems very out of character in comparison to his ability to think ahead and strategize in chess. In PS, he clearly can see ahead and understand that sometimes you have to accept the unpleasant choices in order to win in the end.
I look forward to reading more.

Thank you for your review. If you had taken time to read my A/N's you would have seen that I DID NOT REWRITE the Prologue or the first three or four chapters, except to change some pertinent parts of it to change the plot. All other chapters after those are ALL MINE, hence all errors, from there on, are mine.

Wow! Thisjust gets better and better! :)