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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far, keep up the good work,,post more soon,,dont wait till next week please...need more info soon..
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Both Snape and Hermione are belivable and well written. Loved Ron's reaction to the book. Can't wate for the next chapter.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes it is still very good and I like the speed of the story. No complaint, just observation...when you write a conversation could you please not
put it all into one sentence. for example:
"Hermione why do I think I am not going to like what you have to tell us."
"I know Harry but I need you to stand by me." Hermione said.
It's not word perfect, just to show you what I mean. However, the story is still brill.
put it all into one sentence. for example:
"Hermione why do I think I am not going to like what you have to tell us."
"I know Harry but I need you to stand by me." Hermione said.
It's not word perfect, just to show you what I mean. However, the story is still brill.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really getting into this story and I cant wait to see what happens next!! Hope the Muses keep giving you inspiration for many chapters!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Only on Chap 2 so far, but I like this variation--it makes more sense in light of canon (well, except maybe HBP). Well-executed and entertaining so far.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this, i can't wait to read more! update soon!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still great!! Cant wait for more!!! I love it...just in case I didn't say it before.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looks great! can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I like this- keep it coming.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, don't stop now!!
Nice touch with the note in the book. I thought I'd just take a peek into this story, but you captured Snape's tone so well with the note that I was hooked.
Nice touch with the note in the book. I thought I'd just take a peek into this story, but you captured Snape's tone so well with the note that I was hooked.