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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really enjoyed reading this story so far and hope for more soon!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 & 2 - I just read that you were hesitant to post this as you haven't written anything for years. It would have been a waste. Your story is well written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing with us.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The other chpaters also lived up to the first two. I can imagine her parents reacting that way at first but I would think they would soon re-evaluate the situation. Just a comment, watch your pronouns. I caught a couple of "shes" when they should have been "hes." I
will look forward to the next chapter next week.
will look forward to the next chapter next week.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like the way this is going. it will be interesting to see how everything plays out. can't wait til the next chapter.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful chapter. I think my favorite part was when Snape stepped between Hermoine and her father. I got chills hehe. More soon please!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great fic cant wait for more.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I am excited to see where you go with it, and will certainly be looking for updates! The Hermione/Snape pairing has become my absolute favorite, and when I finish Bloodbound I will certainly dive into another of this pairing!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great story!!! I
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story so far! Please update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany