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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot recall if I have reviewed this fic yet, but will do so now: I am enjoying this fic, and do seem to remember reading one similar (perhaps the first draft?) a while ago. I have been keeping up with your story and am a very impatient person who wishes you do dedicate all your time to finishing this story. After all, you really don't need money for goods nor sleep - right?
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter. Can I ask where you got the information for
the leaf's and herbs, making a wedding gift for Severus? I found it a lovely
inclusion. Looking forward to reading more. Best wishes.
the leaf's and herbs, making a wedding gift for Severus? I found it a lovely
inclusion. Looking forward to reading more. Best wishes.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Donavon - I knew I forgot to do something (smacking head on desk). Email me and I'll give the listing of it to you.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will update soon! This story is soooo good!! Keep it up!
Cheerio,
Skullduggery
Cheerio,
Skullduggery
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. The story itself is excellent. But one thing. This is silly and a pet peeve of mine.
Grammer lesson-
YOUR-is the possesive (ie your car, your hair, your computer, etc.)
YOU'RE-is the contraction of YOU ARE (ie you're running late, you're a good writter, etc.)
This mistake is all too common in fanfiction. Please could you work on this?
Now as for the story itself, it is great. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Grammer lesson-
YOUR-is the possesive (ie your car, your hair, your computer, etc.)
YOU'RE-is the contraction of YOU ARE (ie you're running late, you're a good writter, etc.)
This mistake is all too common in fanfiction. Please could you work on this?
Now as for the story itself, it is great. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are evil and must be tied to your computer and 'Imperio'd' into writing more amd more of this thoroughly enjoyable piece of literary yummyness!
Fantastic Snape interaction with Hermione's parents.
I humbly offer a large bar of Honeydukes Best Chocolate to your muse as inspiration for the completion of this wonderful story!
Blessings : )x
Fantastic Snape interaction with Hermione's parents.
I humbly offer a large bar of Honeydukes Best Chocolate to your muse as inspiration for the completion of this wonderful story!
Blessings : )x
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay another great chapter. I can't believe how Hermoines parents are being such sillys! D<
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED it!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update soon!!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful strong chapter. Loved Severus in this chapter. At first cooly assessing his future,
before Hermione saw him. And then to actually show his emotive thoughts at Hermione's parents.
Will be watching for more. Best wishes.
before Hermione saw him. And then to actually show his emotive thoughts at Hermione's parents.
Will be watching for more. Best wishes.