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for It Started With A Kiss

by LVanna

person Donavon.
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. Why did the cords merge into one plait? Are we going to find out?
Will be looking forward to the update. Best wishes,
person Miepje
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful chapter. I loved all the details of the binding.

And I'm really looking forward to next chapter! ^^
person RunDesireRun
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was so beautiful. A nice long chapter that was so poetic. I didn't know that this was going to be so Wiccan, which brought a different light to the ceremony. Very nice.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person elizabethb
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! You have done a wonderful job so far! Please keep it going!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Hooray another chapter. ^_^
person Eli
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent plot- i'm stoked for more :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Gabz
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!

Really great story so far. Please keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Gabz
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person lady-isowen
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't tell you how much I loved this chapter! Severus was so kind and sweet to Hermione, and the dress sounds amazing!! Please update soon and keep up the brilliant work!! :)