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i am loving this story .. wow to be bound just by a kiss .. and this chapter especially .. cant wait to read more

uh? Chapter 2 is a bit screwed up. So sorry, I'm not gonna read this.

My review was about the conga line only. I don't think that your writing as a whole is bad at all. Just that part.

To everyone who is making comments to me, here's me e-mail gatokitty8@hotmail.com.

Tough Cookie: People put pagan and wiccan traditions in HP stories, because Rowling has yet to give us any insight on how to perform a wedding....Do you honestly think that Severus Snape and Hermione Granger are going to walk into a Catholic church and ask a priest to perform their nuptuals? Pagan and Wiccan binding ceremonies are all we have to compare with, Darlin'.

Stratyllis: Well that was about the most contradictory review I have ever read in my life. First of all, the writer made it clear at the beginning that the chapter had not yet been betaed. Did you start this story in chapter eight? It would seem that if the story were, as you claim, "bad, fluffy, crappy writing," you would have given up long before chapter eight; and, the characters did not suddenly leap ooc in chapter eight, meaning that they have not been entirely in canon from the beginning. Furthermore, what have you written that you can show as being obviously superior to this story? From what I saw, it was absolutely zilch. If you're going to presume to be such an authority on mechanics, you could at least back it up with some proof that you can do better. Picking up a story where another author left off is never easy. If you think you can do a better job, then by all means, give it a whirl. Don't stoop so low as to flame an author who is giving it a try. There's a term I would like to introduce you to---Constructive Criticism.

My only complaint is that you're not writting fast enough! I can't wait to see what you do next. As for your flammer, please don't get discouraged, they're an idiot. It takes a lot of energy and courage to put your work out there. I commend you on a job well done. Constructive Critisim would be useful, but only if it is done constuctivly. Mine for you would be I would like to see a little more description. But overall you're doing a great job. I find it funny that they left the comment Anonomusly.
Jade

First of all, I must really comemorate your wonderful writing ability. You make the story your own with your imagination and vividness. Your writing seems to capture the senses and make the impossible seem possible. Beautifully written in my point of view. I absolutely adore this plot and am anxious to see what awaits us. Please do not take the comments of others (tough cookie and stratyllis)too seriously. There are many of us out there that can't wait for the next chapter, including me. Hope your muse has much chocolate to indulge in. Hope your next chapter is coming soon.

~An Intrigued and Anxious Reader

Brilliant!!! The chapter was perfect. Best wishes,

Okay, you lost me at conga line. Out of character, bad, fluffy, crappy writing. It might have been a good chapter if it weren't for that.

*gasping for air* Anyone have a fan? *phew* That was hott! *lol* Brilliant chapter...I'd been waiting for this one. Wonderful work and please update soon!! :)

That was a hot and lovely wedding night! Will we find out what the Ancient Ones have planned next for the couple?
And Dumbledore leading a Conga line *lol*

Looking forward to more. Thanks!