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Rifraff this is awesome! You are doing an excellent job attributing the seven deadly sins to Snape. I look forward to your subsequent chapters.

Yet another interesting chapter Riff. Keep up the great work.

Umm, yeah. See, that's just not enough story. So you have to write more 'cause two chapters isn't gonna cut it. I REALLY want to know what happens next. Can you notify me when you update this?

Be off the air, being treated. Get your mind out the gutter, New kitchen, new bathroom, and imagine the theme from JAWS.....Rewire...Rewire. I am still as sane as normal, magically. What is normal?

New chapter appears of Snape/Harry slash...Identify: Clever, well written...conclusion...Riffraff.

Best wishes, Donavon.

Another slashy good story from the incomparable RiffRaff.

Can't wait for the other sins...

I encourage you to continue the story .. so far the "dark" is both interesting and not obnoxiously angsty. I'm very keen to see what you do with each chapter.

I like your stories very much and this is no exception ... Despite the occasional lapse of grammer or spelling, your narrative, characters, and plot are usually compelling and in this regard always worth a try. Some are not my "cup of tea" and I don't ready those! Do ever use a beta? I'm not suggesting that you do so...I'm just curious how much revision you actually do... your chapters read like relentless, inspired 2nd drafts... putting all your energies into movement and detail once the plot thread is layed down ... rather fresh, I think, and gives the air of being less studied and posed than many of the good fanfictions. I don't know your stories well enough to know your opinion of your own writing so I hope I'm not insulting - I rather like your trashy writing too, and I mean that in the best sense.

Just started reading this category about 2 months ago when I couldn't find any good het updates. This would be my first review to you. Thanks for all your stories.

Another chapter, I see.. And I

A very nice chapter and I'm glad you didn't kill him off in the first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the very good work.~Sophia

So Snape's not dead. Sounds like he wishes he were at the moment though. So is Harry and Snape in a relationship then or not? Or were they before but Snape pushed him away. My guess is the latter, that Snape pushed him away, but Harry's still trying to get him back. Looking forward to the next chap, I'm very interested to know where this story is going. Its really good so far.

Still waiting....