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for Seven Sins of Severus Snape

by harriet

person vampchic
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, cant wait for the others. Great chap as always. Hope the next update wont be so far off.
person Sophia
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very well written chapter. I can't wait for the last two. Keep up the great work.
person Ree
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Bows down on her hands and knees* I bow down to thee, for this has got to be one of the best fics I've read in a while. You've got a couple of spelling mistakes, but that's all right ^^ Nothing a second read-through can't fix.

Kaiba: *Snorts* So sayeth the girl with no beta reader herself.

Shut it! Anyway, please keep writing. I can't wait to see what "Lust" and "Wrath" look like. I wish I could remember the last one..."Greed" was it? Anyway, awesome work!
person Sophia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this story really did just get a lot more interesting (not that it wasn't before). I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the very good work.
person antipyro
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, I do believe that this is getting interesting. Love the 'outside the box' thinking on these sins....you're soooo insidious.
person vampchic
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic really is different from your other ones, but its just as good. Cant wait for the next update, hope it's soon.
person vampchic
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man do I feel stupid lol I had opened chap three yesterday to read and didn't finish it until just a little bit ago. I left my review, thinking it was going to be a couple of days still until you update. I get back to the main page and there's your fic, already updated lol And may I say, that was a good update. Better than what I was hoping for. lol Though if it was Snape Mastering Harry I would of been much happier lol. Great update, and I'm so looking forward to more. Especially if there's going to be more sub Harry lol.
person Donavon.
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The most ridiculous thing just happened while reading your Glutony...I held my breath, then right at the end when you state he deserves this pain I slowly exhaled. A little bit of breath play? Or just so intense?
Brilliant writing as per usual. Best wishes,
person Sophia
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another very well written chapter. I like the duel that Snape and Sirius had over Harry. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the very good work.
person vyator
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, very well done, loved the duel in the latest chapter