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meh.. just meh lol I cried, I only really cry at well written fics. This was well done, I espcially like how you did Snape's point of view. Definalyl different. Excellent work

"Anger is a sin, no longer his to bear." OMG! I almost started sobbing when I read this. It's the most wonderful... I mean... wow... *cowers down in awe*

Oh god you killed Severus. I'm not going to yell at you because you did warn me about it but it't still sad and I'm almost in tears right now, but it's a beatiful writing and poor poor Harry loosing his love.

Wow such emotions, it's amazing. Keep it up

Really good!! please update!

well this was the last piece i hadn't read from you. i like it very much and hope to see the last two sins one of these days.

-Chokes- Okay I promise not to kill whatever Weasley happens to be.... -glares in rage- sexually abusing his partner, who just happens to be the loveable Harry. THAT MOTHERFU- uhh... I promise to get past Chapter 5, and finish this story. I don't care if a character dies in the end, as long as the red head sonuvabitch dies before then. Excuse my excessive language, I happen to be easily riled. But if Severus does not seriously fuck up that bitch, grrr... Anyways I love your story so far, and yes I'm done ranting. Its well written and I absolutely love the idea of using the seven deadly sins in accordance with Severus Snape. Its hot.

Well i finished the Fifth Chapter and I must say I'm highly disappointed, but I suppose Severus Snape has always preferred words and threatening looks before blows. Although I would have liked to see that red head in unbearable pain. He deserves nothing of Harry's sweet innocence. And who is the red head anyhow? Bill, perhaps? Maybe even Ron, for he is older than Harry. I'm sorry that I don't go on and on about your fantastic writing, although it is great, or just ask, more like pitifully bed, you to write more. I am not normally that kind of person. And if I ever just ask for an update it means I was to lazy to give my true review or opinion on your story. I find your story enthralling, there is no doubt in that. I am a writer as well and I recognize a gift when I see one. You do have a gift in this art, painting words before our eyes to make us envision exactly what it is that plays out in your own mind. The presence of the characters, the pain they feel, like a mural painted on a canvas your words draw a scene. Please do update this story and hopefully it leaves me in tears, for only a good story can bring about such strong emotions.

Child of the Darkened Moon

Very interesting theme...I look forward to more...k

oh my now this here is some good reading, as are all your other fics,but anyways I'm loving this story so far and can't wait for the next two chapters.