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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story so far and very well written. Please continue writing it. I know it's older but please continue.
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story .....is it finished?
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooookay. This chapter is twisting itself into some interesting knots. I can't wait to see if you get Harry and Severus together and give them a happily-ever-after. If you are one of the writers on this site who use email update lists to notify when you've added new chapters to your stories, may I please be added to the list for this story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll review for you. <3
Please continue!!!!
I like the thought of Sirius being Harry's dad. Oh, is Harry that wolf? I thought he was... it just seemed too random for him not to be. The whole 'unregistered animagus' thing sort of pulled it together.
Your story actually makes sense! (alot of other stories I've seen on here just... either don't make sense or are really evil)
I like how thier in-character even when Harry's acting different. The way you write it, it just seems like it's exactly what Harry would do.
Even the whole 'Snape being nice' kind of thing seems to fit perfectly fine.
I like the length of the chapters too.
Even though you haven't updated in a while, I'm still very hopeful to see another chapter from you. Please keep going!!!
Please continue!!!!
I like the thought of Sirius being Harry's dad. Oh, is Harry that wolf? I thought he was... it just seemed too random for him not to be. The whole 'unregistered animagus' thing sort of pulled it together.
Your story actually makes sense! (alot of other stories I've seen on here just... either don't make sense or are really evil)
I like how thier in-character even when Harry's acting different. The way you write it, it just seems like it's exactly what Harry would do.
Even the whole 'Snape being nice' kind of thing seems to fit perfectly fine.
I like the length of the chapters too.
Even though you haven't updated in a while, I'm still very hopeful to see another chapter from you. Please keep going!!!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please continue it soon! I am actually thinking this might turn out well. So PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Will you write more? Please!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
last time i read this it was only up to ch 4 or 5 n i probably forgot to review.
anyway, i'm really glad there've been updates.
ever since "the wolf" was introduced i had always thought, could that be Harry, maybe? *nudgenudge* LOL
n i liked the part that Sev continuously tries to pet "his" wolfie
it was kinda sad that both Malfoys are bad, n ever worse that Drao was eaten alive *shivers*
wow Harry w/ miracle powers!? that's kinda far-fetched--feeling
but it's nice to have Sirius back, seeing as this story follows HBP
i had a few more comments, but just so sleepy i dun remember much now... OTZ
just a small critique/suggestion, use spellcheck, cuz there area a few typos that sticks out
anyway, i'm really glad there've been updates.
ever since "the wolf" was introduced i had always thought, could that be Harry, maybe? *nudgenudge* LOL
n i liked the part that Sev continuously tries to pet "his" wolfie
it was kinda sad that both Malfoys are bad, n ever worse that Drao was eaten alive *shivers*
wow Harry w/ miracle powers!? that's kinda far-fetched--feeling
but it's nice to have Sirius back, seeing as this story follows HBP
i had a few more comments, but just so sleepy i dun remember much now... OTZ
just a small critique/suggestion, use spellcheck, cuz there area a few typos that sticks out
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more...please
it's really very good
it's really very good
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this.. but is there more? I would like it...
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent story!! I really like how it's developed and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the grand work!~Sophia