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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you are continuing this story, is quite good.
The mystery of what happened to Harry is interesting and also the dependency he have to Hermione, even if he doesn't sayit in so many words, his actions are obvious.
The relationship that Hermione have with Ron is long over, she should make it end, even if she doesn't stay with Harry, she doesn't love Ron like a lover and its making him and her unhappy, better to let him go to find another person.
I just hope to read next chapter soon and also I keep my vote to a H/Hr story.
JO
The mystery of what happened to Harry is interesting and also the dependency he have to Hermione, even if he doesn't sayit in so many words, his actions are obvious.
The relationship that Hermione have with Ron is long over, she should make it end, even if she doesn't stay with Harry, she doesn't love Ron like a lover and its making him and her unhappy, better to let him go to find another person.
I just hope to read next chapter soon and also I keep my vote to a H/Hr story.
JO
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for another good chapter! I like how you show Hermione's inner fight. I hope to read more! Please keep writing. I would like to know if Hermione ends up with Harry. And I can't wait to read about Sam! Hurry!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this over on RS.org, and am quite glad to see that it's posted over here. Does this mean that you will be revising the version over on RS.org? Because I believe there's another chapter over there. Oh I just can't wait for a NEW update =) Good luck with the writing!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know, what to think about this story. I think it is so highly unlikly that Hermione could EVER cheat in a relationship, that I just have problems to find this story believable. If she gets like this when she is kissing Ron: "feeling the nausea build in her stomach again", why is she not ending it? It would be much more believable and easier too. I just don't get it. Hermione is too OOC.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I read it over at restrictedsection.org, but I could never figure out how to review over there so I'll review now. This story is phenomenal. I love dark stories, but hardly anybody writes them. And if they do, most of them are done poorly. This story is extremely well-written and mysterious. I eagerly await the upcoming chapters when we can learn more about Harry and Hermione's relationship along with what exactly happened to Harry when he was captured.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Keep writing. I want to see how the relationship develops between Harry and Hermione. And will Mrs. Weasley discover their secret? I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way how you started with the situation how ist is now but also showed how everything started between them. Your story is not superfical, all the describtions make the story whole. Hey, are we going to see more from Sam?
In hopes to read more soon....
[Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
In hopes to read more soon....
[Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply great. I can not wait for an update.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Keep writing. I want to see how the relationship develops between Harry and Hermione. And will Mrs. Weasley discover their secret? I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way how you started with the situation how ist is now but also showed how everything started between them. Your story is not superfical, all the describtions make the story whole. Hey, are we going to see more from Sam?
In hopes to read more soon....
[Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
In hopes to read more soon....
[Sorry for sp- english is not my mother language]
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absolutely brilliant.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whew! that was rather intense, wont you agree? ;-) you got the knack for making vivid what may altogether look and sound timid. and at the right moment, you slipped in the cliffhanger. and a reader just cant help waiting what happened when Harry disappeared. Very well written scenes and smartly mature theme really gets this fic going. And im waiting with anticiaption the next chapter, mate. ;-) hope it wont take long to upload it. ;-)