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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These few chapters have just been...wow! I don't even want to put it into words because I think it would just end up sounding cheesy, but my jaw dropped by the end of the chpaters. You've done a great job creating an internal conflict with Hermione, she isn't full of self pity. Other then that I love the way you started the first chapter out...the little details that you put in are full developed. I congratulate on writing this wonderful piece of work.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I am captivated!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best, hottest, most interesting, provocative H/HG FF that I've ever read.
I was so totally entralled with it, but unfortunately on AFF you can't set an alert for Favorites or Updates, so I lost it, and had to put in a request on the "Looking for Fics" section. Thank goodness some poor soul took pity on me, and found it for me! I am now going over to this RestrictedSection.org that you wrote about in your A/N and check it out. I am not familiar with that site.
You are an awesome writer. That first chapter plays and re-plays in my mind often. The most enticing part about it for me was when Hermione named all the things she knew about Harry that no one else knew. OMG! So personal, so intimate, so sexy, so forbidden! I was hooked!
I don't know if you read your reviews, since they aren't emailed to you via AFF, but hopefully you will get this, and update the story. In the meantime I always have my request in "looking for..." that I can refer back to in case I lose it again! This is awesome! Mind blowing. You ROCK!
Thank you!
I was so totally entralled with it, but unfortunately on AFF you can't set an alert for Favorites or Updates, so I lost it, and had to put in a request on the "Looking for Fics" section. Thank goodness some poor soul took pity on me, and found it for me! I am now going over to this RestrictedSection.org that you wrote about in your A/N and check it out. I am not familiar with that site.
You are an awesome writer. That first chapter plays and re-plays in my mind often. The most enticing part about it for me was when Hermione named all the things she knew about Harry that no one else knew. OMG! So personal, so intimate, so sexy, so forbidden! I was hooked!
I don't know if you read your reviews, since they aren't emailed to you via AFF, but hopefully you will get this, and update the story. In the meantime I always have my request in "looking for..." that I can refer back to in case I lose it again! This is awesome! Mind blowing. You ROCK!
Thank you!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
email me if you update
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i realii enjoy the stroy the whole secret between them is thrilling cant wait for more
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great new chapter and I was so glad to see it up. I feared that the story might be abandoned.
Hermione is a very tight spot and I feel very sorry for her, but she should let Ron go and confront Harry if he sees any future for them. Anyway, please write more soon!
Hermione is a very tight spot and I feel very sorry for her, but she should let Ron go and confront Harry if he sees any future for them. Anyway, please write more soon!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I can't wait to see what happens when the Weasley's, especially Ron, finds out. Wonder if Hermione or Harry end up telling him or if he catches them going at it. Either way, I can't wait for another chapter.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with what THX1138 said. First of all she should not be complaining about Hermione being OOC because you put a fair warning in the beginning of the story that both she and Harry would be. Second of all, I don't think she's really all that OOC. I think it makes sense that Hermione would find it hard to break Ron's heart after she has come to realize she doesn't love him in the way he loves her anymore. It's not always easy getting out of a relationship that you've been in for a long time even after the love's run out. Plus, Hermione is human. Human beings cheat. She loves Harry, and doesn't want to hurt Ron. It makes sense. It's a hard situation for anyone to be in.
Anyway, you have gotten an essential part of story telling down; telling an interesting story ;-) I hope you continue on with this... and seriously? Ignore people like THX1138 who just refuse to understand what's going on.
- Alannah
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with what THX1138 said. First of all she should not be complaining about Hermione being OOC because you put a fair warning in the beginning of the story that both she and Harry would be. Second of all, I don't think she's really all that OOC. I think it makes sense that Hermione would find it hard to break Ron's heart after she has come to realize she doesn't love him in the way he loves her anymore. It's not always easy getting out of a relationship that you've been in for a long time even after the love's run out. Plus, Hermione is human. Human beings cheat. She loves Harry, and doesn't want to hurt Ron. It makes sense. It's a hard situation for anyone to be in.
Anyway, you have gotten an essential part of story telling down; telling an interesting story ;-) I hope you continue on with this... and seriously? Ignore people like THX1138 who just refuse to understand what's going on.
- Alannah
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry Potter is a monster, a God amongst mear mortals. I mean GOD FUCKING DAME!!!! 4 times in 24 hours and i bet it wasn't soft romantic love making either considering how sore Hermione seemed to be afterwards. Harry is God