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very very good, especially the last chapter with bellatrix toying with harry......any chance of some more please..

love the tortured and sexy Harry, keep writing, I wanna hear more

I always liked reading about a 'bad attitude' Harry. As with the books, whenever I read anything Harry Potter, I always picture Dan Radcliffe, and he looks like he could give some attitude, especially in the bed room. Please continue.

So glad to see you back posting. First read your fic at RS.org. Here you have more freedom to edit your story as many times as you need to. Luv your story!!! Not trying to rush you or anything but I hope you update soon.

YAY! I'm so happy you are continuing this story! Its been one of my favorites for a long time. Please update soon!

Holy crap, you just took this story to a level I can truly appreciate. Harry/Bella and the prison sex is one of my favorite set-ups, so YAY! for that scene!! For some reason, though, you just don't get too many writers for it, although I think it practically writes itself out of canon. You know Bella probably diddled herself to sleep at night dreaming about getting her mitts on Harry and doing unspeakable things to him.

So, yes, I can see his sex addiction so much more clearly now. If anything, it provided some relief from all that pain that was being inflicted on him, and psychologically, it still works as a de-stressing mechanism. Brilliant. And he's dragged poor, confused Hermione into it. Now I'm wondering what will have to happen for him to come clean with her. Oh, this tangled web is so enticing. Can hardly wait to see where you go with this story! Oh, and if Harry has a few more flashbacks with Bella and Narcissa, that would be swell.

Great stuff!

I am so glad you are continuing this. It is an awesome story. One request, less star breaks across they make my screen roll funny.

Wow; It *has* been a while.

Hmm, Rylee, I recall reading the first few chapters of this story once upon a time on another site, and I was really intrigued by the idea but lost your story along the way. This version seems like the racier edition. Not sure when you started this, but I love the dual POV's and you are portraying my absolute favorite Harry---namely, tortured and sexy as fuck. I love how incredibly complicated you've made their affair; Hermione being so torn up about the guilt but being a total slag for him whenever he wants her, and Harry in his best Harry-state trying not to let anyone see his vulnerability. I'm so curious about what happened to him after he was taken. I'm hoping it's deliciously awful.

I feel so bad for Ron in this, and it saddens me how his relationship with Harry seems to have dwindled, as Harry obviously settled on the other third of the trio to be his confidante and comforter. I guess because he doesn't want (or can't, in this story) to shag Ron senseless, that friendship seems to have stumbled. Of course, I'm sure Harry is feeling his own sense of guilt buried underneath all those layers. He's a complex conundrum, so seemingly caddish and blunt on the outside, but roiling with all kinds of horrors within. Please tell me you're continuing this and that you haven't given up on it.

This situation can only end horribly.


I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the great work!