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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First, I would like to applaud you for the musical video... It's awesome!! That last scene, however, I was wondering if you could just end it at the shoot on Harry and Draco's faces, and cut out the part where Draco looks up and pretend to see something horrifying. The anger and contempt shown on both Harry and Draco's faces at that last scene is enough to wrap everything up, I think.
I like this story a lot. Now that Harry is a horcrux, how is he going to destroy Voldemort without killing himself? Will his bond to Draco help?
I like this story a lot. Now that Harry is a horcrux, how is he going to destroy Voldemort without killing himself? Will his bond to Draco help?
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!!!!! they're doing something!! ^_^
i can't wait to see what Hermione does once she gets through that door. ^_^ will Draco even still be there i wonder?... ^_~ (as soon as Harry's outside teh wards, he'll probly get zapped straight to Draco's side ro vice versa) XD
still........NEED...MOOOORE!!!!!!!! *dying of story hunger*
i can't wait to see what Hermione does once she gets through that door. ^_^ will Draco even still be there i wonder?... ^_~ (as soon as Harry's outside teh wards, he'll probly get zapped straight to Draco's side ro vice versa) XD
still........NEED...MOOOORE!!!!!!!! *dying of story hunger*
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! You've done very well with introducing twists into the story at a very appropriate pace-- not to slowly nor too fast. Harry and Draco's bond/relationship is very believable (not to mention HOT). I can't wait to see more. This is a fantastic story!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there is a red disclaimer mark in the first chapter. put one up here in the first chapter before someone pulls your fic.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good! update soon! awwwww! draco's worried! hehe ^_^ btw Voldie's snake is called Nagini.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! I hope they get away alright.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. awesome story! this isn't the end right?? IT BETTER NOT BE! i love this story i really do! it's really good. and so sweet! plz update! :D
xx rach xx
xx rach xx
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update updaaaaate!!!!!!!!
plssss?!?!
plssss?!?!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!! SOOOOOON!!!!! I can;t wait to see what will happen.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... sad feelings....sorry can't have a random review..kinda sad in my own right...but i am very very happy with this chapter. and i feel bad that i can't think of nothing fun to say.