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awwwww! i LOVE possessive!draco!!! *dreamy sigh* update soon! ^_^

this is my first review of this fic. It's not that I didn't want to reveiw, I just had to get on to the next chapter! Damn, had to go to work today, but finished 20-24 when I got home. I can't believe that this is your first fic! This has moved at a perfect pace, so many new authors wander around randomly throwing in sex scenes and hope that they will eventually come to a logical conclusion. You seem to have this well thought out, I love so many things about this that I don't know where to start. Lets just say that please, please, don't let anything stop you from finishing it. When you get this completed you might want to put it up on the HexFiles, it is definately good enuf for that site. I am always a sucker for the bond stories, just throw in veela Draco and I would have been a puddle of goo.

Oh thank god they've got him back! Well done.

Woot! oh good nothing bad bad happened! obh ohh you left before the welcome home Sex! *pouts*

oh wow!!!! *girly squeal* hehe! they're back together! i love possessive!draco!! update soon! i love how they can sense eachother!

yea for the impending smex. ^_^
mmmmmm, chocolate cake.

This is one of my favorite stories ever. I love the characterization. You don't make the characters seem to OC they just gradually change and have reasons for this change that are explained thoroughly but creatively. Update soon. I love it.

I'm only on chapter 10, but I'm going to review now because this really bothers me. I really hate the fact that Harry is so stupid in this fic. He's not the brightest crayon in the box in canon, but he's not fucking retarded. It seems like every conversation he has, he can hardly get any words out. He comes off like a brainless idiot. I know it's because he is flustered over the whole dream thing, but I think it just goes a bit overboard. Does he have to be that stupid? It's just annoying.

HEY! HE'S SAVED HE'S SAVED HE'S......Not going make it far without somthing happening right? *sighs*

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...please?
Will Severus/Lucius/Draco get through with Harry? Is Harry regenerating his magic? Will Nagini or Voldie intercept them? Will there be battle? Aaah so many questions and no answers!!
..yeah, I'm psyched for the next chapter :P

Spirit