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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Parts I liked parts I did not but at the same time I know how hard it is to write a rape scene and people seem to have Bad opinions about and get nasty about it but i'm not one of them I just think some parts are out of character but its alright.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eek
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story started off good, but really degraded towards the end. I'm sorry to say this, but Great premise, Poor execution....
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a bit odd. She didn't even really try and fight back? But other than a few other obvious things the story was pretty alright, better than most. Keep up the good work.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has good potential, but I feel that something isn't quite right - or at least isn't believable.
If Ginny hates Snape and finds him unattractive, there is no way she is going to have an orgasm from what he puts her through... the anal stuff would be plain torture and pain to her... she would be in too much pain to have an orgasm or to be even slightly excited!
I understand how the fantasy of it would be exciting, but I find fantasies more exciting the more believable they are...
I would have really liked it if either
A) Ginny hated Snape, but was also secretly attracted to him, and that's why she orgasms... (she still wouldn't orgasm through the anal stuff, but she would endure it... perhaps if he used some sort of lubricant, and didn't actually let his wand fuck her until she bled, she would to some extend be excited by it, even if it would still be physically uncomfortable)
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B) Ginny isn't attracted to him, but he "persuades her body" by actually being gentle with her, using his hands to set her body on fire while she is tied down, driving her mad, and ending up making her beg for him to take her... in this version I would prefer that he didn't add the anal stuff, or at least waited until after he'd taken her virginity.
But of course it's up to you. If you're happy with it as it is, then keep ithat way.
I did enjoy reading it, and that's why I'm taking the time to write this to you.
Good luck with your future writing.
Lucia
If Ginny hates Snape and finds him unattractive, there is no way she is going to have an orgasm from what he puts her through... the anal stuff would be plain torture and pain to her... she would be in too much pain to have an orgasm or to be even slightly excited!
I understand how the fantasy of it would be exciting, but I find fantasies more exciting the more believable they are...
I would have really liked it if either
A) Ginny hated Snape, but was also secretly attracted to him, and that's why she orgasms... (she still wouldn't orgasm through the anal stuff, but she would endure it... perhaps if he used some sort of lubricant, and didn't actually let his wand fuck her until she bled, she would to some extend be excited by it, even if it would still be physically uncomfortable)
or
B) Ginny isn't attracted to him, but he "persuades her body" by actually being gentle with her, using his hands to set her body on fire while she is tied down, driving her mad, and ending up making her beg for him to take her... in this version I would prefer that he didn't add the anal stuff, or at least waited until after he'd taken her virginity.
But of course it's up to you. If you're happy with it as it is, then keep ithat way.
I did enjoy reading it, and that's why I'm taking the time to write this to you.
Good luck with your future writing.
Lucia
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was a very interesting story, i think you should keep going with another chapter soon, i love GW/SS stories!!