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for Once an enemy

by negolataknofelet

person GoddessMoonLady
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was delicious! *grin* One question though, is english your first language? I'm not being mean or anything, it's just that almost all of your grammer mistakes are the same ones most people who speak english as a 2nd language tend to make, word placement mainly. It's still an excellent fic though. *grin* I certainly loved it!