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for LUCKY

by Bravmiki

person PensievePerson
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is great. So hot! Keep going
person snapeslave
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god this is a good story...i love lucius like this...i just love lucius anyway...lol..keep up the good work...just please don't make it too long for the lemons...wedding night bonding tradition maybe...hmmmmm....lol...update soon please...
person Mary
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! This is really good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Dylan
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good 2nd chapter.
Shame about Harry's reaction. I expected Ginny name calling. Don't like her anyway.

Hermione not expecting to sleep with him..... Wake up girl!!!!! Ha-ha

Chapter 3 a.s.a.p! Thanks
person Dylan
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
I always love an evil Malfoy. I do hope it won't be too long before we get to the 'action'!
Looking forward to your updates.
person Chavela
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!

I really likeed how this has started out for sure!

I can not wait till you update, and I hope it is soon!
person MagicalAngel
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sooo glad u started another LM/HG story!! I LOVED Sugarquills and I think I'll enjoy this one too!
person lemonade
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Lucius is certainly canon! Sneaky slytherin in every way. I could actually see him doing this. I'm thinking if Hermione did comply, she at least would make life pretty hard for him, I could see her put him thorugh the wringer. Should be extremely fun to read!
person J.S.
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Good first chapter.