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for LUCKY

by Bravmiki

person Redlightspin
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*imagination growls*but we're hungry tooo!!
person Sapphire
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooo! Something tells me there's going to be a huge fight between Pansy Piginson and Hermione Granger? Please make it good and please make it that Hermione comes out the winner! Or should I said Hermione Malfoy?

~Sapphire~
person MagicalAngelForever
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, this is sooo good! Update soon!
person pinkwands
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your Lucius!! he is a perfect mix of evil and sexy hehe :D I loved this chapter and I hope you update soon! :D
person Tenar
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is great!! I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
person DragonKisser
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am LOVING this! LOL! Please another chapter . . . with sexy Lucius on top :-D
person ancientgirl
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far. Although I was a bit shocked at Ginny's reaction. Even though Hermione broke up with her brother, she did sleep with Hermione so I'm not sure I got why she was so upset. But other than that, this is great.
person Epona Rosa
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aah, chap 3 is great. And that first kiss was great as well. I think that Hermione is not going to sleep very well after that first "date" at the Manor.
Ooh, she will begin to realize what is coming her way... I really look forward to see them together in public for the first time (and of course in more intimate
surroundings as well).
Love from Belgium
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg, update soooon!!!
person pinkwands
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooohooo lol go Lucius!! when she was giving him her terms I was thinking uh oh she is gonna get it! hehe and I was right! great chapter adored it! :)