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for LUCKY

by Bravmiki

person June
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - ooh, wonder what Lucius' "contingency plans" are... Thanks for the new chapters! Re "next update will be within the next 7 seven days" - how about if you make the new update much longer? (heh-heh! couldn't help asking...)
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About Damn Time! I have been waiting forever for you to update this story! Although what the the hell she's fighting him for I have nooooo idea! Absolutely no resistance to Luscious Lucius from this girl! Please update soon!
person pinkwands
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! woohoo it was well worth the wait :D ohhh hmm what event would that be huh? something dirty? hehe great chappie!
person Esmeralda
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet Lord! I need more... who can resist they way you depict Lucius? The sexual tension is devine torture! very good love! update soon... I want to see a wedding band on her hand! oh and... the wedding night.. don't forget that lovely detail.. mmm
person Moonstar
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squee*


Update update update!!!!!!
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, i can't wait to see more of this story.
person cherie
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! This is getting good.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEASE update!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Hermione isn't making this easy on Lucius is she? I'm looking forward to more.
person xanti1100
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My very favoirte stories are Lucius and anybody, but especially Hermione. There can't be too many of that type of pairing. You've captured Lucius beautifully, arrogant, hot, commanding, and sexy. Hermione is really trying to give as good as she gets; I like her continuing to resist him (to no avail, of course) 8-). I hope you update this soon, so I can find out what happens at the restaurant, but also when the next intimate "dancing" takes place. You're getting us closer and closer, but snatching them apart, which really makes for great tension. The "climax", as it were, will be all the more fantastic to read. And if there is more than one "climax" I certainly won't complain. Great writing style, love the storyline. Well done. Xanti1100